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Friday, May 29, 2020
Weekend Reads: The Wingfeather Saga (Sarah)
I first encountered Andrew Peterson’s Wingfeather Saga in 2008 when On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness launched, and I kept up with the series through the following three books that chronicled the adventures of the Igiby family. Now The Wingfeather Saga has re-released with new covers, and it's well worth revisiting—or visiting for the first time, if you’ve never encountered these delightful tales.
The Wingfeather Saga follows the journey of three siblings—Janner, Tink, and Leeli. Unbeknownst to them, their family holds secrets that the evil Gnag the Nameless would do anything to discover, secrets that ultimately force them into flight from the dangerous Fangs of Dang. They soon find that there’s more at stake then they ever dreamed, for them and for those they love. Over the course of the series, they confront the evil threatening their world, discover their true identities, and find out just what claiming their inheritance will cost them—and the price that will be paid by the rest of the world if they fail.
On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness starts off with a humorous tone. There’s a tongue-in-cheek introduction of the world and its antagonist, a smattering of wry footnotes, and a land populated by quirky critters such as thwaps and toothy cows. However, the series quickly develops in a more serious direction. While it never fully sheds its notes of humor, it soon ushers in deeper and more meaningful themes of familial love, devotion, and sacrifice. We witness the impact of creativity in the Three Three Great and Honored Subjects: Word, Form, and Song, the importance of sibling and family bonds, and potent illustrations of what love truly looks like.
The Wingfeather Saga is creative, hilarious, and heartwarming, and in the end, profoundly moving, an excellent combination that makes the book suitable for children and adults alike—and perfect for a family read-aloud. Delightful illustrations enhance the reading experience, and the new editions contain even more imagery than the old, eye-catching black and white drawings that appear at intervals throughout the books.
If you enjoy the series, you can dive deeper into the world of Aerwiar through a number of means. Penderwick’s Creaturepedia offers illustrations and commentary on all the creatures that inhabit the land, and The Wingfeather Tales provides a selection of short stories set within the same world. There’s also artwork, coloring pages, and even an animated short video, all available on the series website. And if you enjoy read-alouds, during the pandemic, Andrew has been reading the series on Facebook.
So if you’re looking for imaginative, meaningful family fantasy stories, you should definitely check out The Wingfeather Saga…there’s much to explore and enjoy!
Wednesday, May 27, 2020
Going Dark by Special Guest J.M. Hackman (Burn Blog Tour)
We are so excited to welcome friend and former Lands Uncharted contributor J.M. Hackman to the blog today to celebrate the FINAL book in The Firebrand Chronicles!! Burn just released yesterday, and Jill stopped by to share an inside look at the conclusion of her trilogy!
Take it away, Jill!
Going Dark
Brenna James isn’t perfect. She struggles with ADHD, has no filter, and regularly makes impulsive decisions. But with this story I wanted to add another problem, a pretty big error in judgement. I’d done research to see how ADHD kids handled stressors and discovered kids with ADHD used alcohol more often and earlier than their neurotypical peers. With everything that had happened to Brenna in Flare, I knew there’d be a breaking point—she’d either handle the stress in a healthy way or make a mistake.
In Christian fiction, regardless of genre, there’s often a resistance to the characters going dark. Don’t show depression, the dirty messes, the ways people screw up. And be careful writing about the big mistakes like addiction, self-harm, or any of the other dozens of things people do to hurt themselves. Only recently have writers begun to bravely tackle these issues.
I understand that avoidance. As Christians, we shouldn’t glorify or dwell on the negative. And as a Christian parent, I don’t want my kids to read stuff with a moral compass pointing in a different direction from what we’ve taught them.
Despite this, I kept circling back around to how I thought she’d behave, especially without a lot of parental supervision. After more prayer and discussions with those smarter than me, Burn became a story where she battled herself, learned, and then made better choices.
The Firebrand Chronicles has always been about second chances, something all of us need. In Burn, I hope instead of darkness, the reader sees light emerging from the dark, beauty growing from ashes, a kind of redemption rising from past mistakes.
I so appreciate this open, honest approach to writing, and it makes me even more excited to read Burn! Here's a little more about the book:Life: 1. Brenna James: 0.
An AWOL talent, an enemy-occupied hometown, and a Life Shade boyfriend—Brenna James just wants something to go right. Although her family has been given sanctuary in Syeira, Brenna will never be safe as long as Rune is hunting down and killing Firebrands.
Can someone please wake her up already?
When a prophecy sends Brenna and Baldwin on a confusing quest, they aren’t sure where to begin. They must find the Caelestis Staff, a powerful object that both cuts and mends space itself. Rune wants it too, and he’ll use any lethal tactics necessary to obtain it.
Yeah, nightmare material right there.
A traveling oasis, plenty of man-eating mermaids, and one Skeleton King later, Brenna
seriously doubts she has the edge she needs to confront Rune. When Brenna’s faced with
the biggest test of her life, will she burn like the Firebrand she is? Or will she burn out?
Eeeek, I can't wait! You can find order links for Burn HERE. And here's a little more about the author:J. M. Hackman loves thunderstorms, bookstores, and happy endings. She’s never met a reading nook she didn’t like and prefers soul talk to small talk. When she’s not writing, she spends time with her two munchkins and her handsome husband who supports her in this crazy profession. Her days are filled with writing stories, consuming massive quantities of dark chocolate, and looking for portals to other worlds.
You can connect with her on her website, Instagram, Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, Goodreads, and Amazon. Thank you so much for stopping by to share with us today, Jill, and congratulations on your new release!
Friday, May 22, 2020
Weekend Reads (Katie): Until June and the TBR Pile
Weekend Reads (Katie)
Until June by Barbara Britton
Hi fellow explorers (of Lands Uncharted...get it? No? Oh. Sure. Let's move on...)! Today I want to talk about the book I just finished reading as well as two books on my TBR pile that I'm about to start (yes, I sometimes read more than one book at a time).
When seventeen-year-old seamstress, Josephine Nimetz, agrees to take care of a WWI amputee in a remote Alaskan lodge, there's enough friction to melt the Mendenhall Glacier. Her position is only until June, and it pays well enough to overlook the hardship of managing a rustic home and a shell-shocked veteran.
Geoff Chambers makes it clear that he isn't too fond of the runt sent to take care of his needs, nor of her painful mistakes. Dealing with a depressed and addicted veteran pushes Josephine to the brink of leaving, if not for the money her salary brings.
But Josephine is a perfectionist, determined to get Geoff back on his feet—figuratively...Although, sending a rich, handsome veteran back into society may cost Josephine the man she has grown to love.
Geoff Chambers makes it clear that he isn't too fond of the runt sent to take care of his needs, nor of her painful mistakes. Dealing with a depressed and addicted veteran pushes Josephine to the brink of leaving, if not for the money her salary brings.
But Josephine is a perfectionist, determined to get Geoff back on his feet—figuratively...Although, sending a rich, handsome veteran back into society may cost Josephine the man she has grown to love.
My Thoughts
I absolutely loved this book! When I first read the description , I was immediately interested for the mere fact that it's set in Alaska and my family happens to have a trip booked there in 2021.
Within the first couple pages, though, I knew I had made a good choice in picking up this book, and by the halfway point I was hopelessly devoted and couldn't put it down.
The story is beautiful. The characters are real, and their problems are real--but the entire story is handled with such HOPE. I loved it, start to finish.
Until June gets two big thumbs up from me.
You can find it on Goodreads here!
On To the TBR Pile!
The Story Peddler by Lindsay Franklin
This book isn't new, but it's one I've wanted to read for a long time and haven't gotten around to it. So, I'm excited to dive in!
Here's the description:
Tanwen doesn’t just tell stories—she weaves them into crystallized sculptures that sell for more than a few bits. But the only way to escape the control of her cruel mentor and claw her way from poverty is to set her sights on something grander: becoming Royal Storyteller to the king.
During her final story peddling tour, a tale of treason spills from her hands, threatening the king himself. Tanwen goes from peddler to prey as the king’s guard hunts her down . . . and they’re not known for their mercy. As Tanwen flees for her life, she unearths long-buried secrets and discovers she’s not the only outlaw in the empire. There’s a rebel group of weavers . . . and they’re after her too.
During her final story peddling tour, a tale of treason spills from her hands, threatening the king himself. Tanwen goes from peddler to prey as the king’s guard hunts her down . . . and they’re not known for their mercy. As Tanwen flees for her life, she unearths long-buried secrets and discovers she’s not the only outlaw in the empire. There’s a rebel group of weavers . . . and they’re after her too.
Magician's Rivalry, Book 1 in the Spellsmith & Carver Series by H.L. Burke
I've been reading lots of H.L. Burke books lately (and loving them!). I've already started into this one and I can't wait to keep going! Here's a little more about it:
An estranged son. An adopted heir. A magical attack that forces them to work together.
The disappearance of Auric Spellsmith’s mother has strained his relationship with his father to the breaking point. Now, after five years away at the Magicians’ Academy, Auric returns home, determined to prove himself to his father and claim his birthright.
Apprentice Jericho Carver has held Spellsmith Manor together in Auric’s absence. Now his master’s son is back, and if he can’t get rid of Auric, Jericho will forfeit his career and lose all hope of wooing the master’s enchanting daughter.
Neither man intends to back down.
But then Master Spellsmith vanishes into the mysterious Fey Lands. With Fey magic threatening the mortal realm, Auric and Jericho must work together to save the man they both see as father.
The disappearance of Auric Spellsmith’s mother has strained his relationship with his father to the breaking point. Now, after five years away at the Magicians’ Academy, Auric returns home, determined to prove himself to his father and claim his birthright.
Apprentice Jericho Carver has held Spellsmith Manor together in Auric’s absence. Now his master’s son is back, and if he can’t get rid of Auric, Jericho will forfeit his career and lose all hope of wooing the master’s enchanting daughter.
Neither man intends to back down.
But then Master Spellsmith vanishes into the mysterious Fey Lands. With Fey magic threatening the mortal realm, Auric and Jericho must work together to save the man they both see as father.
So, what about you? Have you read any of these books? What have you been reading?
Tuesday, May 19, 2020
Dear Characters, I'm Tired: Writing with Chronic Illness
"Dear Characters, I'm tired."
A phrase used by most, if not all, writers at some point. Those of us living with chronic illness probably use it even more frequently. It is a battle that I am very familiar with personally. I am a full time writer who lives with a chronic illness known as Postural Orthostatic Tachycardia Syndrome, POTS for short.
I've lived with my illness for about the same amount of time that I've been writing. One could even say I pursued writing as a means of coping with the struggles of a chronic illness emerging and being properly diagnosed. In the years since my journey as both writer and chronic illness warrior began, I've learned a lot about coping with my POTS and how it affects my writing.
One of the most difficult things about a chronic illness, especially POTS, is the fact that anything can act as a trigger for flares. Flares are when the symptoms take on acute and constant pain that directly impact and interfere with navigating life due to your energy being sapped. It is very difficult some days to work through the increased pain of a flare, much less summon the creative energy necessary to produce the worlds and characters inhabiting our books. Sometimes this turns a designated writing day into a brainstorming or plotting day, for me that's lighter work than the actual draft stage. Other times I have to concede the day to rest and recovery, something that can definitely be frustrating when I'm on a deadline.
However, I've learned that if I want to finish my books in a timely manner, I need to push through the tiredness and the pain when possible. I'm currently working on Book #28. Book #27 went live a bit over a week ago. These two books and the next one in my production queue will finish out the urban fantasy series that started it all in 2015. It also happens to be the series I thought I'd be finishing last year. I had to bump my production schedule down due to an extremely pronounced and extended chronic illness flare setting me back because I was simply too sick to write. So I'm very familiar with the frustrations of chronic illness and the negative impacts it can have on your writing schedule. And it's not always possible or wise to push through a flare, which is when you are forced to delay releases.
The thing about writing with a chronic illness is it's pretty much impossible to take every bad day off if you want to finish in a timely manner. I've written three books since the beginning of the new year despite dealing with bad flares because I know when to push and what tricks to use to help with writing through a flare. I've learned how to tweak my writing process where I follow specific steps for prep work before I start drafting, which allows me to have non-writing options for lighter work days. The brainstorming and plotting can be as simple as figuring out names and species for some future series. Or, I could take a plot and expand it into an outline. It may progress a little slower than usual but every little bit adds up in the end. I also use sprints, which usually allows me to make a decent word count dent in an hour or two even if I'm not able to write anything else that day.
Every day is a guessing game when you have a chronic illness. You can't predict if you'll have a good day or if one tiny thing will change a good day into a non-working one. The most effective thing anyone can do is treat every day with the intent to write words and have your backup plan ready for whatever your chronic illness throws at you. Every day is a challenge and an opportunity to rise back up. It is not easy and some days writing 20 words is all your brain can offer but even those 20 words count as a victory because it's 20 words you didn't have at the beginning of the day.
Sometimes, the best way to move forward is to adjust the language you use.
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. Let's switch to this short fun scene for the next sprint."
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. Let's finish this conversation and see what happens next."
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. I'm going to rest and will see you tomorrow."
Chronic illness, like being a published writer, demands a lot. Some days it will be a little too much. Other days you hit the day's goal and are wiped out. And the best days are when you have a good day full of words where one more sentence is a tantalizing reward instead of the tired mantra. It's never easy and you have to learn your own limits as well as how to adapt to still reach your productive days. When writing, you can't wait for inspiration to come find you. You have to hunt it down by showing up to your desk even if the only thing you do that day is backreading. With a chronic illness, you cannot wait for the good days. You have to show up at your desk even if all you do is backread through what you've already written.
To my fellow chronic illness writers, keep being brave and keep putting words on the page.
Kimberly A. Rogers
A phrase used by most, if not all, writers at some point. Those of us living with chronic illness probably use it even more frequently. It is a battle that I am very familiar with personally. I am a full time writer who lives with a chronic illness known as Postural Orthostatic Tachycardia Syndrome, POTS for short.
I've lived with my illness for about the same amount of time that I've been writing. One could even say I pursued writing as a means of coping with the struggles of a chronic illness emerging and being properly diagnosed. In the years since my journey as both writer and chronic illness warrior began, I've learned a lot about coping with my POTS and how it affects my writing.
One of the most difficult things about a chronic illness, especially POTS, is the fact that anything can act as a trigger for flares. Flares are when the symptoms take on acute and constant pain that directly impact and interfere with navigating life due to your energy being sapped. It is very difficult some days to work through the increased pain of a flare, much less summon the creative energy necessary to produce the worlds and characters inhabiting our books. Sometimes this turns a designated writing day into a brainstorming or plotting day, for me that's lighter work than the actual draft stage. Other times I have to concede the day to rest and recovery, something that can definitely be frustrating when I'm on a deadline.
However, I've learned that if I want to finish my books in a timely manner, I need to push through the tiredness and the pain when possible. I'm currently working on Book #28. Book #27 went live a bit over a week ago. These two books and the next one in my production queue will finish out the urban fantasy series that started it all in 2015. It also happens to be the series I thought I'd be finishing last year. I had to bump my production schedule down due to an extremely pronounced and extended chronic illness flare setting me back because I was simply too sick to write. So I'm very familiar with the frustrations of chronic illness and the negative impacts it can have on your writing schedule. And it's not always possible or wise to push through a flare, which is when you are forced to delay releases.
The thing about writing with a chronic illness is it's pretty much impossible to take every bad day off if you want to finish in a timely manner. I've written three books since the beginning of the new year despite dealing with bad flares because I know when to push and what tricks to use to help with writing through a flare. I've learned how to tweak my writing process where I follow specific steps for prep work before I start drafting, which allows me to have non-writing options for lighter work days. The brainstorming and plotting can be as simple as figuring out names and species for some future series. Or, I could take a plot and expand it into an outline. It may progress a little slower than usual but every little bit adds up in the end. I also use sprints, which usually allows me to make a decent word count dent in an hour or two even if I'm not able to write anything else that day.
Every day is a guessing game when you have a chronic illness. You can't predict if you'll have a good day or if one tiny thing will change a good day into a non-working one. The most effective thing anyone can do is treat every day with the intent to write words and have your backup plan ready for whatever your chronic illness throws at you. Every day is a challenge and an opportunity to rise back up. It is not easy and some days writing 20 words is all your brain can offer but even those 20 words count as a victory because it's 20 words you didn't have at the beginning of the day.
Sometimes, the best way to move forward is to adjust the language you use.
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. Let's switch to this short fun scene for the next sprint."
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. Let's finish this conversation and see what happens next."
"Dear Characters, I'm tired. I'm going to rest and will see you tomorrow."
Chronic illness, like being a published writer, demands a lot. Some days it will be a little too much. Other days you hit the day's goal and are wiped out. And the best days are when you have a good day full of words where one more sentence is a tantalizing reward instead of the tired mantra. It's never easy and you have to learn your own limits as well as how to adapt to still reach your productive days. When writing, you can't wait for inspiration to come find you. You have to hunt it down by showing up to your desk even if the only thing you do that day is backreading. With a chronic illness, you cannot wait for the good days. You have to show up at your desk even if all you do is backread through what you've already written.
To my fellow chronic illness writers, keep being brave and keep putting words on the page.
Kimberly A. Rogers
Friday, May 15, 2020
Weekend Reads: Inkworld Trilogy [Heather]
Do you have a favorite go-to when someone asks for a book recommendation that is "as good as Narnia or The Lord of the Rings"? Okay, maybe no one will ever write books THAT good again...but I think we are all looking for the next riveting, too-good-to-put-down series. Personally, I have a couple of favorites that I will recommend, but I'm only going to share one and save the others for later!
The Inkworld trilogy by Cornelia Funke is one of those series that I gobbled up! I'm not entirely sure how I came across it the first time, but I believe it was through browsing my library app Libby (formerly Overdrive) which allows your to check out three audiobooks at a time and, I believe, a dozen ebooks. For free. (Hint: you need this app!!!).
It's an older series (early 2000s) but somehow it missed my radar at the time. It would've been such fun to read it aloud to my kiddos when we homeschooled! The series asks the question, "What if you had the power to bring a book to life, simply by reading it aloud?" (I know...we all kind of wish we had that superpower!).
The books (translated from German) follow twelve year old Meggie and her father, whom she calls Mo, as they attempt to outrun and outwit a devious, heartless villain named Capricorn. Meggie's mother has been gone since she was small, and she and her father are quite close. He lovingly restores old books, and the two live in a house surrounded by stacks and stacks of them.
"If you take a book with you on a journey," Mo had said when he put the first [book] in her box, "an odd thing happens: The book begins collecting your memories. And forever after you have only to open that book to be back where you first read it. It will all come into your mind with the very first words: the sights you saw in that place, what it smelled like, the ice cream you ate while you were reading it . . . yes, books are like flypaper--memories cling to the printed page better than anything else." A favorite quote from Inkheart by Cornelia FunkeOne rainy night, Meggie spies a mysterious man standing in the rain, staring up at their house. She wakes her father who let's the man inside. His name is Dustfinger and her father seems to know him. Dustfinger refers to Mo as Silvertongue. Meggie is confused by these odd monikers and slightly afraid of this man with the scarred face and a furry creature called a Marten living in his backpack.
Before dawn, Mo is packing Meggie and their belongings in an old camper and moving them, with Dustfinger in tow, to an Aunt Elinor in Italy. This aunt has even more books than Meggie and her dad. It is also the perfect place for Mo to hide a certain, secret book that he's trying to hide from both Capricorn and Meggie.
When she confronts her father about his new penchant for secrets and lying, she begins to uncover truths that she never expected and her father always feared.
When Dustfinger convinces Meggie to ask her father why he never ever reads to her aloud, Meggie learns why Mo's nickname is Silvertongue. His words have the power to pull characters out of the story and into reality, with the added danger of pulling things from his world and putting them into the world of the book.
What develops is complicated and enthralling! The world of the secret book and Meggie's own world become intertwined and inseparable. Both are richly imagined and their characters are evocative and unforgettable.
Though this is a middle grade book, it's one that any fantasy lover will appreciate. It would be a great read-aloud for a family as it's clean, though there may be some tense moments here and there to be cautioned about. This is one series that I'd like to buy in hardcover to add to my library.
Of course, as with my other weekend reads, this is another that I've listened to as audiobooks. Interestingly, each book has a different narrator, though the POV never changes. The first book, Inkheart, was narrated by Lynn Redgrave. The second book, Inkspell, was narrated by actor Brendan Fraser who also portrays Mo in the film adaption, and the final book, Inkdeath, was narrated by Allan Corduner.
Yes, Inkheart is actually a movie, which you may have already seen! Somehow, I missed that too, back in 2009. Here's a link to the trailer to give you a WEEKEND WATCH in case you need that too! I was disappointed to find that they crammed all three books into the one film, which left viewers with only a weak sampling of the plot. I understand artistic license and blah, blah, blah, but it really did these books a disservice, in my opinion. I suppose if you were to watch the movie first, you wouldn't know what was missing and might enjoy it more.
Have you already seen the movie or read the books? What did you think?
Thursday, May 14, 2020
You Have to Start Somewhere by Special Guest Lydia Jane
Friends!! We have a guest post with some fantastic writing tips today, AND we have exciting news! We are thrilled to welcome Lydia Jane to Lands Uncharted - not only as a special guest, but as our newest contributor! Lydia is an Associate Editor for Monster Ivy Publishing and will be sharing her encouragement, writing tips, and knowledge of the publishing industry in her new section of the blog, Editor's Alley! (Find out more on her bio page.) Welcome, Lydia!!
You’re snuggled up in your favorite spot. In one hand, you swirl a mug filled with something rich, aromatic, and caffeinated. With the other, you rifle through page after page of notes. No more procrastinating. You’re finally going to do it. You’re officially starting your first draft. Yet, as your fingertips arc over the keyboard, everything goes blank. Hours pass. Before you know it, you find yourself scrolling through memes while binge-watching a show you’ve seen a hundred times. And, in the background, the document remains open. Empty. Its blinking cursor still longing to taste your first choice words.
Beginnings are tough. Especially in fantasy. Not only do you have to introduce characters, setting, structure, and narrative, but in many cases, you have to build a whole new world from scratch that no one has seen before. With so many pieces to juggle, your plot can easily get lost in the details.
So how should you start your story? Whether you’re a pantser or a plotter, of if you prefer to write your beginning chapters first or last, here are some pointers to help get those creative juices flowing:
Instead of trying to reinvent the wheel, start with something familiar and make it your own. Whether your target audience is Middle Grade, Young Adult, or Adult, using well-known tropes or story structures is a quick and easy way to help expedite the process of world building. For inspiration, seek out and study other novels that match your story, target audience, and style. This way, you can establish a solid framework for your beginning, blending together a delicious mixture of your own creativity alongside nostalgic story-beats.
Some classic approaches to fantasy beginnings include:
The Prologue/Preview: There’s no shame in a classic fleshed out prologue or one-page preview. These can be effective tools, allowing you to provide a taste of your world, history, background, and rules. You can even use this format to deceive your reader and give them a false version of events, building up to the truth later.
Before the Storm: Open with an idyllic scene where everything seems perfect. Then, unleash the storm, forcing your characters to suffer tragedy after tragedy.
In the Middle: Throw the reader straight into the middle of a conflict, whether physical, emotional, or both. Some classic “In the Middle” openers include things like chase scenes, battles, action set-pieces, or emotional climaxes.
The Aftermath: Start by showing your character suffering from the consequences of a dramatic event. Then either travel back in time to tell the story up to this point, or move forward, showing how the character will overcome their circumstances.
Winds of Change: Begin with a character living life in monotonous or miserable circumstances, then introduce a plot device that brings the character much-needed change or hope.
How do you want the reader to feel at the start of your story? Excited? Anxious? Sad? Whimsical? Focus on the tone you’re going for and let everything (from the setting to the characters, to the very mood of your piece) emulate this specific emotion and voice. Don’t tell your audience that things are bad or that they should feel miserable, show them how terrible things are and make them feel misery. One of the easiest ways to craft tone is to determine your starting point, then decide whether you want the emotional tone of the narrative to rise or fall.
Two of the classic styles of tonal direction include:
The Comedy: where the story, setting, and characters start in tragic conditions, then things take a turn for the better.
The Tragedy: where the story, setting, and characters start in ideal conditions, then things take a turn for the worse.
Creating a narrative that has a steady, but exciting pace can be incredibly difficult. Here are a few points to help you maintain momentum:
Keep Tension High: No matter how you choose to end your first few chapters, always make sure something is left unresolved. If you character has something they desire, prevent them from gaining it. If the plot has a goal to achieve, make it fail. Build up the challenges for the protagonist to overcome at the beginning, that way when they finally achieve their goals at the end, the pay-off will satisfy your readers.
Create a Chain-Reaction or Domino Effect: For this, make sure that plot devices, characters, story beats, and events have a noticeable impact from chapter to chapter. Weave together a sense of continuity. Create a snowball effect, where the plot points you introduce begin to build on top of each other, resulting in even greater consequences with each new chapter. This will maintain your momentum as you work your way up to your central conflict and climax.
Trim the Fat: If the scene is not essential to the plot or to the individual character arcs, cut it. If there is description or information repeated several times, cut it. If you can convey the same sentence or paragraph in a more concise manner, then trim it down. This is one of the most difficult things to do, but it will ultimately streamline your plot and prevent the story from dragging.
Limit Flashbacks: Unless your narrative is built on traveling back and forth to different points in the story’s timeline, reduce the number of flashbacks and backstory. Large chunks of backstory can interrupt the present narrative, slowing down the present story line to a crawl. Instead, strive to show information from the past in the present, so that the timeline continues along a linear path that keeps your reader engaged and moving forward.
Express yourself. Dig down deep and uncover the most raw essence of your emotions, thoughts, experiences. Throw in all your favorite vocabulary words. Personalize each character so they pop off the page. Bring in as much of your personality to the narrative as possible. Because your voice will ring louder and truer than any trope or classic theme.
And when in doubt, just write. Even if it’s the most cliché writing in the world. Even if the words make you want to cry, write it down. You can also go back later to polish and refine. But you can’t perfect what isn’t written. Even if all you have to start with is “Once upon a time,” go for it. After all, you have to start somewhere. So, what are you waiting for? Go forth and let your own story begin!
You Have to Start Somewhere
Beginnings are tough. Especially in fantasy. Not only do you have to introduce characters, setting, structure, and narrative, but in many cases, you have to build a whole new world from scratch that no one has seen before. With so many pieces to juggle, your plot can easily get lost in the details.
So how should you start your story? Whether you’re a pantser or a plotter, of if you prefer to write your beginning chapters first or last, here are some pointers to help get those creative juices flowing:
Use the Familiar:
Some classic approaches to fantasy beginnings include:
The Prologue/Preview: There’s no shame in a classic fleshed out prologue or one-page preview. These can be effective tools, allowing you to provide a taste of your world, history, background, and rules. You can even use this format to deceive your reader and give them a false version of events, building up to the truth later.
Before the Storm: Open with an idyllic scene where everything seems perfect. Then, unleash the storm, forcing your characters to suffer tragedy after tragedy.
In the Middle: Throw the reader straight into the middle of a conflict, whether physical, emotional, or both. Some classic “In the Middle” openers include things like chase scenes, battles, action set-pieces, or emotional climaxes.
The Aftermath: Start by showing your character suffering from the consequences of a dramatic event. Then either travel back in time to tell the story up to this point, or move forward, showing how the character will overcome their circumstances.
Winds of Change: Begin with a character living life in monotonous or miserable circumstances, then introduce a plot device that brings the character much-needed change or hope.
Craft Your Tone:
How do you want the reader to feel at the start of your story? Excited? Anxious? Sad? Whimsical? Focus on the tone you’re going for and let everything (from the setting to the characters, to the very mood of your piece) emulate this specific emotion and voice. Don’t tell your audience that things are bad or that they should feel miserable, show them how terrible things are and make them feel misery. One of the easiest ways to craft tone is to determine your starting point, then decide whether you want the emotional tone of the narrative to rise or fall.
Two of the classic styles of tonal direction include:
The Comedy: where the story, setting, and characters start in tragic conditions, then things take a turn for the better.
The Tragedy: where the story, setting, and characters start in ideal conditions, then things take a turn for the worse.
Set the Pace
Creating a narrative that has a steady, but exciting pace can be incredibly difficult. Here are a few points to help you maintain momentum:
Keep Tension High: No matter how you choose to end your first few chapters, always make sure something is left unresolved. If you character has something they desire, prevent them from gaining it. If the plot has a goal to achieve, make it fail. Build up the challenges for the protagonist to overcome at the beginning, that way when they finally achieve their goals at the end, the pay-off will satisfy your readers.
Create a Chain-Reaction or Domino Effect: For this, make sure that plot devices, characters, story beats, and events have a noticeable impact from chapter to chapter. Weave together a sense of continuity. Create a snowball effect, where the plot points you introduce begin to build on top of each other, resulting in even greater consequences with each new chapter. This will maintain your momentum as you work your way up to your central conflict and climax.
Trim the Fat: If the scene is not essential to the plot or to the individual character arcs, cut it. If there is description or information repeated several times, cut it. If you can convey the same sentence or paragraph in a more concise manner, then trim it down. This is one of the most difficult things to do, but it will ultimately streamline your plot and prevent the story from dragging.
Limit Flashbacks: Unless your narrative is built on traveling back and forth to different points in the story’s timeline, reduce the number of flashbacks and backstory. Large chunks of backstory can interrupt the present narrative, slowing down the present story line to a crawl. Instead, strive to show information from the past in the present, so that the timeline continues along a linear path that keeps your reader engaged and moving forward.
Find Your Voice
Express yourself. Dig down deep and uncover the most raw essence of your emotions, thoughts, experiences. Throw in all your favorite vocabulary words. Personalize each character so they pop off the page. Bring in as much of your personality to the narrative as possible. Because your voice will ring louder and truer than any trope or classic theme.
Write, Write, Write
And when in doubt, just write. Even if it’s the most cliché writing in the world. Even if the words make you want to cry, write it down. You can also go back later to polish and refine. But you can’t perfect what isn’t written. Even if all you have to start with is “Once upon a time,” go for it. After all, you have to start somewhere. So, what are you waiting for? Go forth and let your own story begin!
Tuesday, May 12, 2020
Story Snippets: Guardian Prince (Lauricia)
Greetings all, and welcome back to Lands Uncharted. I hope you are all doing well, and
that you’re mastering your new normal with pizazz in whatever way that looks
like for you.
I’m
super thrilled because I get to share another story snippet with you. Today, it’s an excerpt directly from my upcoming release, Guardian Prince, which is the sequel to The
Healer’s Rune. I’m afraid I don’t have a release date yet, but as soon as I get
one from my publisher, I’ll be sure to let you know. If the excerpt below
interests you, the best way to learn about the release date is to join my email list via the signup form at Lauricia-Matuska.com.
That
said, here’s the excerpt. It’s a snippet
from chapter one, where Sabine first rejoins the Aethel who rescued her at the
end of book one. I hope you enjoy!
“Human,”
a deep voice called from nearby.
Sabine
glanced up to see Koen standing a few feet away, his bright, leaf-red hair
contrasting sharply with the deep black feathers of the raven perched on his
shoulder. She fixated on the sight of the raven's talons sinking into the
shoulder of the Dryht’s leather jerkin. Recalling the weight of the bird when
he had landed on her lap, and the sharpness of his talons against her leg when
he had sprung off, Sabine reasoned the Dryht must be stronger than his
remarkably tall, lean frame suggested.
The
raven turned his head to one side, regarding Sabine and her dog with a large,
bright blue eye. Then, turning his head to the other side as if for a better
look, he studied them with his bright green eye. A fraction of a moment later
he shrieked a raucous call and fluffed his feathers. Instinctively, Sabine
clutched a fist-full of Bree's fur, to keep the dog from jumping at the bird,
but Bree did not even tense. Amazed, Sabine watched the dog and the bird
politely disregard each other, as if they were used to spending great amounts
of time together.
“The
others are waiting for you,” Koen prompted politely, but with a slight air of
command. “The Rüddan could be upon us at any moment. Follow me.”
Sabine
nodded and did as the Dryht requested, but unease stirred within her. She had
thought she would be safe after she fled from Khapor. “The portal is still
under attack, then? Or are they coming
at us from another direction?”
Koen
stopped and turned back to her, his eyebrows arched. “We are half a world away
from your village, Human. The portal is the only way they can reach us now.”
Sabine
frowned. Half a world away from Khapor?
She did not understand how that could be, but she did not want to appear
foolish in front of this Dryht, either.
“Portals
are not like normal doors,” Koen explained, as if reading her expression. “With
any doorway, the distance from one side to the other is a mere step. For
portals, however, the distance is much greater. When you passed through our
gateway last night, you traveled from your tiny island village to the largest
continental forest in Ceryn Roh.”
“But
don't the Rüddan know where we are?”
Koen
shook his head. “Before the War of New Dawn, all portals were originally
created and maintained by the Dryht. Although the other races used them, only
mine understood them. They were destroyed by the Rüddan in the War, but we have
spent the past three hundred years restoring them. Even if the Rüddan knew how
they work, they have no idea where any given portal leads. As far as they know,
we could be anywhere in the world.”
Sabine
nodded. “So the only way to get to us is to cross over from Khapor.”
“Exactly,”
Koen said. Turning, he began once again to lead her to the others. “And while
no portal has ever fallen when it was attacked, that doesn't mean it can't, so
no more delays.”
Sabine
fell into step beside the Dryht, following closely as he guided her through a
forest that appeared equally maintained and unkempt. The trees seemed to grow
in large clusters: a variety of cedar, pine, and oak gathered here, a knot of
willow and elm over there. Creepers, ivies, and shrubs twined around and
through each thicket. The spaces between them, while not completely empty of
bushes or trees, had a sense of being designated walkways.
Koen
led her to one of these stands a short distance away from where she had slept,
a large copse of rowan, ash, birch, and willow. Pausing just outside the cluster,
he pushed aside a thick curtain of vines to reveal a narrow entrance, which he
gestured her to pass through.
She
did, realizing too late that Bree had followed her in. She would have shooed
the dog back outside, but Koen was right behind her, his tall frame filling the
doorway. He did not seem to notice the dog, and the raven still sat on his
shoulder, so Sabine let it go, hoping nothing would come of it.
Inside,
the stand of trees looked like a large room. As with the other buildings she
had been in since last night, the trees grew closely together, their varying
shapes and sizes tiling among, against, and over each other and the surrounding
foliage to form walls while their branches intertwined to weave a roof. Muted,
dappled sunlight filtered through the leaves overhead, illuminating a long,
narrow table that filled the center of the room where a group of men and women
appeared to be conferencing over breakfast. Much to Sabine's surprise, she
recognized most of them.
Aodhan,
the Aethel prince she had rescued and nursed back to health, sat at the head of
the table, flanked on his left by Gaelan and his right by an Aethel man she had
never met before, but who appeared vaguely familiar. Aodhan’s sister, the Lady
Diera, sat across from him at the other end of the long table. Amala, her
lady-in-waiting, sat to Diera’s right, attending her blind mistress. Aodhan’s
cousin Taylion, whom Sabine knew as Tayte, sat near the center of the table on
one side. The chairs across from him and to his right were empty.
Koen
directed Sabine to the spot beside Tayte, for which she was glad. Of everyone
seated at the table, he was the person she had known the longest and the best.
He was the reason she was no longer enslaved to the Rüddan.
The
conversation stopped abruptly as she approached, giving her the impression that
whatever they had been discussing somehow involved her. Their silent stares
unnerved her, causing her stomach to clench. Squaring her shoulders, she kept
her head up and met each gaze and glimpse as levelly as she could. They wanted
her here, she told herself. They had attempted to rescue her not once but twice.
Still, the reminder did nothing to ease the sense of being weighed and judged.
Tayte
nodded to her, catching and holding her attention. The shape-shifter wore his
Aethel form rather than his Human appearance, his smile warm and gracious. The
knot in her stomach eased a bit.
“Good
morning, Sabine,” he said expansively. His voice filled the silent room,
reminding her of the tone her mother used when indirectly commanding her and
her sister to be polite in front of the company. As he spoke, he rose to pull
her chair out for her. “Welcome to our table. Please, join us.”
Sabine
gasped softly, concerned that her friend should put so much weight on the leg
he had broken during last night's escape. She glanced at his shin, then looked
again, startled to see no cast. Tayte followed her gaze.
“It
is healed, my friend,” he said gently as he motioned her to sit, then inclined
his head toward the Aethel seated beside him and to Aodhan's right. “Kyar saw
to it last night.”
Stunned,
Sabine nodded in greeting, finally recognizing Kyar as the mysterious stranger who
had tended Tayte's unconscious form the night before.
Kyar
regarded her silently, his dark eyes so cold and piercing that she could not
look at them for very long. Unsure what else to do, she adjusted her cloak
slightly to allow herself to sit and accepted the chair Tayte had offered.
Koen
joined the table, as well, his raven flying to a nearby tree limb. He took the
seat across from Tayte and began filling his plate with food from the dishes
laid out over the table. “Help yourself,” he said, gesturing in Sabine’s
direction with his plate. “We do not have the time to tarry.”
Friday, May 8, 2020
Weekend Reads: Random Walk by Rachel Lulich (Lizzie)
I occasionally read out of my normal genres, and a recent excursion brought me to the hard science fiction novel Random Walk (Fractured Galaxy Book 1) by Rachel Lulich. I would classify the read as a very thrilling and enjoyable trip. One clear out of the solar system. :) Basically, it's a modern day Apollo 13 with a black hole instead of the dark side of the moon. Enough said, right?
Random Walk tells the story of three US Air Force Space Command astronauts, Derek Williams, Jacob Mendez, and Vicky Abrams, as they test an experimental engine on a flight to Mars. Things go wrong, of course, and they travel much farther than they thought possible, or wanted to go.
The book started a little slow for me, but then I wasn't used to hard science fiction, but once I got used to all the detail, I began to enjoy it. The research was spectacular, and I feel like I know what it's really like to be an astronaut or to be in mission control (this part really made me think of Apollo 13 and Hidden Figures).
I wanted to be an astronaut when I was a kid, and have always been a science nerd, so I enjoyed the realism and science of it. I also like the diverse array of characters, the clever solutions, the awe of being in space. There was tension with the troubles they found themselves in, a realistic amount of interpersonal getting-on-one-another's-nerves (which we can all relate to, especially during quarantine) but nothing overly dramatic, and some exciting danger. I don't want to say too much so I don't spoil anything, but I've very much looking forward to the next book.
If you like hard science fiction or want to branch out and read something different, check out Random Walk (Fractured Galaxy Book 1) by Rachel Lulich.
The book started a little slow for me, but then I wasn't used to hard science fiction, but once I got used to all the detail, I began to enjoy it. The research was spectacular, and I feel like I know what it's really like to be an astronaut or to be in mission control (this part really made me think of Apollo 13 and Hidden Figures).
I wanted to be an astronaut when I was a kid, and have always been a science nerd, so I enjoyed the realism and science of it. I also like the diverse array of characters, the clever solutions, the awe of being in space. There was tension with the troubles they found themselves in, a realistic amount of interpersonal getting-on-one-another's-nerves (which we can all relate to, especially during quarantine) but nothing overly dramatic, and some exciting danger. I don't want to say too much so I don't spoil anything, but I've very much looking forward to the next book.
If you like hard science fiction or want to branch out and read something different, check out Random Walk (Fractured Galaxy Book 1) by Rachel Lulich.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
Interview with Tori V. Rainn
We are so excited to welcome Tori V. Rainn to Lands Uncharted to celebrate the release of her debut novella, Curse of the Blacknoc Witch! I had the opportunity to read an early version of this story (and to work with Tori on our critique group's anthology of fairy tale retellings, Encircled), and her writing is always full of creativity, humor, and heart. Today, this lovely lady took the time to answer some questions for us - enjoy!
Tell us a little bit about yourself.
I’m mostly a fantasy writer but also dabble in other genres like horror and sci-fi. I’m the youngest in my family of two old brothers. I grew up in a small town in Texas and have always considered myself a bit of a nerd - DC and Marvel fan and lover of video games. My love for writing and reading came in my teens.
What prompted you to start writing? Are you one of those authors who knew you were meant to write since childhood, or did it come as a discovery later in life?
I would say no. Writing is never something I’d imagined myself doing. I didn’t discover my crazy imagination until in my teens when I had a story idea for a video game that was adventurous. Not long after that idea was born I decided to instead start a novel. I wrote my first three chapters of that novel and never picked it up again, haha, mostly because I didn’t know a thing about writing. It wasn’t until I took a writer’s course when my writing journey took off and I began writing countless short pieces that eventually led to novels and novellas. When I saw that this writing flame of passion wasn’t dying any time soon I realized it was something I should be doing.
You do have an incredible imagination! Which fictional character (book or movie) do you most relate to, and why?
I have trouble relating to most characters so I will mention a character I admire, which is Angelina Jolie’s Maleficent. After being betrayed, she’s set to inflict harm on the one who caused her pain. She takes pleasure in the harm she’s inflicted but the walls she’s put around her heart slowly crumble when she falls in love with Aurora. She sees Aurora as her daughter. Not only is the relationship between Maleficent and Aurora beautiful but the transformation of Maleficent’s heart is admirable.
I still need to see that movie! We’re all about exploring new worlds here at Lands Uncharted—if you could choose one place to visit, real or fictional, where would you go?
It would either be New Zealand or Ireland. I don’t know why I’ve always been attracted to those places but every time I see pictures of those beautiful places I just want to go there. I wouldn’t mind touring a castle or staying in a manor in Ireland. How amazing that would be? It’s a dream of mine.
Ooh, that would be amazing! What advice would you share with an aspiring author?
Write what you love. Others may or not agree with what you write but you must stay true to yourself. Don’t follow trends. Follow and make your own path. Procrastination is your worst enemy. You will do yourself the biggest favor by finding a way to get ahead of procrastination. Remember, you’re a writer when you’re doing one thing: writing.
Great things to keep in mind! Your debut novella, Curse of the Blacknoc Witch, released in April! Congratulations!! What inspired you to write it?
I love stories with good vs evil themes and I’m especially fond of monster/ghost stories so Curse of the Blacknoc Witch is the product of my personal interests that’s held together by one core idea I really wanted to tell in this story. That core idea was showing characters facing their monsters, something the reader doesn’t necessarily have to take literally from the story. I also wanted to focus on showing the reader that just because you may feel like a monster, doesn’t mean you are one. Samuel’s redemption is a testimony to that.
I love that, Samuel is such a great character. Did any of the events in the book surprise you as you were writing?
Probably everything surrounding the curse surprised me. I had no clue how to go about developing the curse. The supernatural elements that made up the curse took me by surprise. It was dark and twisted just like the witch, and while it seemed fitting, it still wasn’t what I expected. I'm happy to say I'm pleased with the end result.
It's definitely a dark curse, but it makes the story so cool! Can you give us any insights into your next project?
Yes, of course. My 60k fantasy is about two siblings who are chosen for an ancient challenge. They must compete against other groups and use their powers to capture magical animals roaming the forest and to fight against ailiarants who completely detest everything the siblings stand for.
Ooh, I'm intrigued! Thank you so much for sharing with us today, Tori! Congratulations again on your new release! Here's the back cover blurb for Curse of the Blacknoc Witch:
Samuel dreamed of being a lot of things, but a monster trapped in a forest realm never entered his mind. The Blacknoc Curse wasn’t supposed to be true, only a children’s story meant to persuade them away from evil. Yet, here he was tasked with hunting cursed kids. There’s nothing left for Samuel except the horror surrounding him. Layla, a young girl tormented by the same curse, is dropped into the terrifying forest every night, running from the monsters intent on taking her life. She meets Samuel and vows to save all the children, especially Samuel, from their torment. Working together can they defeat the Blacknoc Curse?
You can find Curse of the Blacknoc Witch on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Goodreads. And make sure to connect with Tori V. Rainn on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and her website!
Tell us a little bit about yourself.
I’m mostly a fantasy writer but also dabble in other genres like horror and sci-fi. I’m the youngest in my family of two old brothers. I grew up in a small town in Texas and have always considered myself a bit of a nerd - DC and Marvel fan and lover of video games. My love for writing and reading came in my teens.
What prompted you to start writing? Are you one of those authors who knew you were meant to write since childhood, or did it come as a discovery later in life?
I would say no. Writing is never something I’d imagined myself doing. I didn’t discover my crazy imagination until in my teens when I had a story idea for a video game that was adventurous. Not long after that idea was born I decided to instead start a novel. I wrote my first three chapters of that novel and never picked it up again, haha, mostly because I didn’t know a thing about writing. It wasn’t until I took a writer’s course when my writing journey took off and I began writing countless short pieces that eventually led to novels and novellas. When I saw that this writing flame of passion wasn’t dying any time soon I realized it was something I should be doing.
You do have an incredible imagination! Which fictional character (book or movie) do you most relate to, and why?
I have trouble relating to most characters so I will mention a character I admire, which is Angelina Jolie’s Maleficent. After being betrayed, she’s set to inflict harm on the one who caused her pain. She takes pleasure in the harm she’s inflicted but the walls she’s put around her heart slowly crumble when she falls in love with Aurora. She sees Aurora as her daughter. Not only is the relationship between Maleficent and Aurora beautiful but the transformation of Maleficent’s heart is admirable.
I still need to see that movie! We’re all about exploring new worlds here at Lands Uncharted—if you could choose one place to visit, real or fictional, where would you go?
It would either be New Zealand or Ireland. I don’t know why I’ve always been attracted to those places but every time I see pictures of those beautiful places I just want to go there. I wouldn’t mind touring a castle or staying in a manor in Ireland. How amazing that would be? It’s a dream of mine.
Ooh, that would be amazing! What advice would you share with an aspiring author?
Write what you love. Others may or not agree with what you write but you must stay true to yourself. Don’t follow trends. Follow and make your own path. Procrastination is your worst enemy. You will do yourself the biggest favor by finding a way to get ahead of procrastination. Remember, you’re a writer when you’re doing one thing: writing.
Great things to keep in mind! Your debut novella, Curse of the Blacknoc Witch, released in April! Congratulations!! What inspired you to write it? I love stories with good vs evil themes and I’m especially fond of monster/ghost stories so Curse of the Blacknoc Witch is the product of my personal interests that’s held together by one core idea I really wanted to tell in this story. That core idea was showing characters facing their monsters, something the reader doesn’t necessarily have to take literally from the story. I also wanted to focus on showing the reader that just because you may feel like a monster, doesn’t mean you are one. Samuel’s redemption is a testimony to that.
I love that, Samuel is such a great character. Did any of the events in the book surprise you as you were writing?
Probably everything surrounding the curse surprised me. I had no clue how to go about developing the curse. The supernatural elements that made up the curse took me by surprise. It was dark and twisted just like the witch, and while it seemed fitting, it still wasn’t what I expected. I'm happy to say I'm pleased with the end result.
It's definitely a dark curse, but it makes the story so cool! Can you give us any insights into your next project?
Yes, of course. My 60k fantasy is about two siblings who are chosen for an ancient challenge. They must compete against other groups and use their powers to capture magical animals roaming the forest and to fight against ailiarants who completely detest everything the siblings stand for.
Ooh, I'm intrigued! Thank you so much for sharing with us today, Tori! Congratulations again on your new release! Here's the back cover blurb for Curse of the Blacknoc Witch:
Samuel dreamed of being a lot of things, but a monster trapped in a forest realm never entered his mind. The Blacknoc Curse wasn’t supposed to be true, only a children’s story meant to persuade them away from evil. Yet, here he was tasked with hunting cursed kids. There’s nothing left for Samuel except the horror surrounding him. Layla, a young girl tormented by the same curse, is dropped into the terrifying forest every night, running from the monsters intent on taking her life. She meets Samuel and vows to save all the children, especially Samuel, from their torment. Working together can they defeat the Blacknoc Curse?
You can find Curse of the Blacknoc Witch on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Goodreads. And make sure to connect with Tori V. Rainn on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and her website!
Tuesday, May 5, 2020
Flash Fiction Fun! (Laurie)
Back in 2017, I wrote a post about my first experiences writing short stories. I'd been pleasantly surprised that after writing two full-length novels, I'd managed to write a story in under 10,000 words! At the time, I never dreamed I'd be capable of writing anything shorter, and flash fiction (*very* short stories that are usually 1,000 words or less) didn't appeal to me since it seemed way too quick - over before I had a chance to feel engaged or connected to the characters.
Fast-forward two and a half years, and my first flash fiction piece, "Rubbed the Wrong Way," was published in an anthology titled Stories That Sing that just released on April 30th (isn't the cover gorgeous??). The same publisher, GoHavok.com, will be posting my second flash fiction piece, "Dragonbreath," on their website tomorrow (Wednesday, May 6th)! Somewhere along the way, it seems I've come around to being a fan of reading and even writing flash fiction :)
The blessing and curse of flash fiction is that it's so short. Really good flash fiction is so much fun to read because you get a great story in a matter of minutes. On the downside, it can feel incomplete - one scene where the rest of the story is missing, an action sequence without enough context to appreciate what's going on, or an overview instead of an engaging plot.
So that's where the trick of writing flash fiction comes into play. How do you write something that short without disappointing readers' expectations? For me, I've found the key lies in the story planning. For full-length novels, I spend a minimal amount of time plotting and figure out most of the details as I write. But for flash fiction, I put a much greater percentage of time into brainstorming, because if I can't nail down a story that will work in such a small word count, I'll never get anywhere in the writing phase.
When I was brainstorming "Dragonbreath" (which falls in Havok's Super Duper theme, featuring stories involving superpowers), I thought it would be fun to write about a guy who can breathe fire, and all the complications such an ability would add to his day-to-day life. But even the shortest of stories needs to be leading somewhere, and I struggled to turn my list of humorous anecdotes into a coherent plot. As I tried to figure out a way his power could be useful in resolving a conflict, the story threatened to expand way beyond the word count limitation. Any kind of epic battle or rescue could never be adequately portrayed in a few short pages. Eventually, I dreamed up a female character with her own troublesome superpower and a way their talents could interact, and it all clicked into place! Go figure my superpower story would take a turn towards romance... :)
What I love about writing flash fiction is the challenge. When you're limited to 1,000 words, there's no space for overwriting or weasel words, which forces a honing of writing and editing skills that transfers well to longer works. And as an editor once pointed out to me, readers shouldn't feel the tension of the word count. A really well-written piece of flash fiction should tell an engaging, satisfying story without the reader needing to make excuses for the author due to the length restriction. I don't think I'm quite there yet, but it's fun to try! Also, I've found flash fiction to be a great way to keep writing and creating during times when I find it hard to focus on longer projects (like right now, in the midst of social distancing, coronavirus scares, and having my husband and kiddos always at home!).
If you're interested in flash fiction as a writer and / or reader, I'll put in one more quick plug for Havok! New flash fiction pieces are posted on GoHavok.com every weekday and some Saturdays, all following a certain theme but in a variety of genres. Each story is always free to read on the day it's posted (like mine will be tomorrow), or you can become a member and access their entire database of stories. They've been a pleasure to work with, and I'd highly suggest stopping by whenever you're looking for a quick read!
Any fellow flash fiction writers out there? Do you enjoy reading shorter fiction, or do you prefer to stick to full-length books?
See you next time!
Laurie
So that's where the trick of writing flash fiction comes into play. How do you write something that short without disappointing readers' expectations? For me, I've found the key lies in the story planning. For full-length novels, I spend a minimal amount of time plotting and figure out most of the details as I write. But for flash fiction, I put a much greater percentage of time into brainstorming, because if I can't nail down a story that will work in such a small word count, I'll never get anywhere in the writing phase.
When I was brainstorming "Dragonbreath" (which falls in Havok's Super Duper theme, featuring stories involving superpowers), I thought it would be fun to write about a guy who can breathe fire, and all the complications such an ability would add to his day-to-day life. But even the shortest of stories needs to be leading somewhere, and I struggled to turn my list of humorous anecdotes into a coherent plot. As I tried to figure out a way his power could be useful in resolving a conflict, the story threatened to expand way beyond the word count limitation. Any kind of epic battle or rescue could never be adequately portrayed in a few short pages. Eventually, I dreamed up a female character with her own troublesome superpower and a way their talents could interact, and it all clicked into place! Go figure my superpower story would take a turn towards romance... :)
What I love about writing flash fiction is the challenge. When you're limited to 1,000 words, there's no space for overwriting or weasel words, which forces a honing of writing and editing skills that transfers well to longer works. And as an editor once pointed out to me, readers shouldn't feel the tension of the word count. A really well-written piece of flash fiction should tell an engaging, satisfying story without the reader needing to make excuses for the author due to the length restriction. I don't think I'm quite there yet, but it's fun to try! Also, I've found flash fiction to be a great way to keep writing and creating during times when I find it hard to focus on longer projects (like right now, in the midst of social distancing, coronavirus scares, and having my husband and kiddos always at home!).
If you're interested in flash fiction as a writer and / or reader, I'll put in one more quick plug for Havok! New flash fiction pieces are posted on GoHavok.com every weekday and some Saturdays, all following a certain theme but in a variety of genres. Each story is always free to read on the day it's posted (like mine will be tomorrow), or you can become a member and access their entire database of stories. They've been a pleasure to work with, and I'd highly suggest stopping by whenever you're looking for a quick read!
Any fellow flash fiction writers out there? Do you enjoy reading shorter fiction, or do you prefer to stick to full-length books?
See you next time!
Laurie
Friday, May 1, 2020
Amazing New Releases! (Vanessa)
Happy Friday! I hope everyone is doing well with the new normal and that spring has sprung where you live!
I have three amazing new releases to share with you all today!
The first is Winter Spell by Claire M. Banschbach. This delightful read is book three in The Faeries of Myrinus series. Though it is the third in the series, it can be read as a standalone. I had the pleasure of reading an Advanced Reader Copy of Winter Spell and I loved it! It had the perfect blend of friendship, adventure, and magic.
Here's what it's about: A half-breed faery. A war-weary princess. A quest to free three kingdoms from the deadly winter spell.Constantly doubted by her ocean faery kindred, Tonya Freyr-dottir only wants to untangle the dormant ice and water magic within her. Then a strange attack makes her unleash a fierce winter on the land and sea. And she has no idea how to stop it.Princess Diane serves faithfully at her brother’s side, trying to restore their kingdom of Myrnius after the devastating Dark War. Now with brutal winter wreaking havoc, everything they have worked for might be lost to famine and destruction.Desperate to help, Tonya travels to the far north to unlock her magic, aided by Diane, as well as two land faeries: Dorian, a reckless healer and August, a mischievous warrior. But the north brings fresh dangers, unearths old wounds, and offers more questions than answers.With doom threatening human and faery alike, Tonya must find a way to trust her new friends and release her magic before all fall to the fury of winter’s spell.Buy now and enjoy a fairy tale adventure with friendship, danger, overcoming adversity, and even a hint of romance.
Winter Spell was released on April 23. Click here to buy it on Amazon!
The next awesome new release is Legend of the Storm Sneezer (The Stormwatch Diaries Book 1) by Kristiana Sfirlea. LotSS is so much fun to read! I fell in love with Rose and Marek the instant I read about them! This middle grade story is packed with goofiness, great stories, and funny quips you'll enjoy!
Here's what it's about: Legend Seeker. Part-time Ghost Hunter. Time Traveler.
Thirteen-year-old Rose Skylar sneezed a magical storm cloud at birth, and it’s followed her around ever since. But when Stormy causes one too many public disasters, Rose is taken to Heartstone, an asylum for unstable magic. Its location? The heart of a haunted forest whose trees have mysteriously turned to stone.
They say the ghosts are bound to the woods … then why does Rose see them drifting outside the windows at night? And why is there a graveyard on the grounds filled with empty graves? Guided by her future selves via time traveling letters, Rose and Marek—best friend and potential figment of her imagination—must solve the mystery of the specters and the stone trees before the ghosts unleash a legendary enemy that will make their own spooks look like a couple of holey bed sheets and destroy Heartstone Asylum.
Letters from the future are piling up. Rose can’t save Heartstone herself. However, five of herselves, a magical storm cloud, and a guardian angel who might very well be imaginary? Now that’s a silver lining.
But will they find what killed the ghosts before what killed the ghosts finds them?
I have three amazing new releases to share with you all today!
The first is Winter Spell by Claire M. Banschbach. This delightful read is book three in The Faeries of Myrinus series. Though it is the third in the series, it can be read as a standalone. I had the pleasure of reading an Advanced Reader Copy of Winter Spell and I loved it! It had the perfect blend of friendship, adventure, and magic.
Here's what it's about: A half-breed faery. A war-weary princess. A quest to free three kingdoms from the deadly winter spell.Constantly doubted by her ocean faery kindred, Tonya Freyr-dottir only wants to untangle the dormant ice and water magic within her. Then a strange attack makes her unleash a fierce winter on the land and sea. And she has no idea how to stop it.Princess Diane serves faithfully at her brother’s side, trying to restore their kingdom of Myrnius after the devastating Dark War. Now with brutal winter wreaking havoc, everything they have worked for might be lost to famine and destruction.Desperate to help, Tonya travels to the far north to unlock her magic, aided by Diane, as well as two land faeries: Dorian, a reckless healer and August, a mischievous warrior. But the north brings fresh dangers, unearths old wounds, and offers more questions than answers.With doom threatening human and faery alike, Tonya must find a way to trust her new friends and release her magic before all fall to the fury of winter’s spell.Buy now and enjoy a fairy tale adventure with friendship, danger, overcoming adversity, and even a hint of romance.
Winter Spell was released on April 23. Click here to buy it on Amazon!
The next awesome new release is Legend of the Storm Sneezer (The Stormwatch Diaries Book 1) by Kristiana Sfirlea. LotSS is so much fun to read! I fell in love with Rose and Marek the instant I read about them! This middle grade story is packed with goofiness, great stories, and funny quips you'll enjoy!
Here's what it's about: Legend Seeker. Part-time Ghost Hunter. Time Traveler.
Thirteen-year-old Rose Skylar sneezed a magical storm cloud at birth, and it’s followed her around ever since. But when Stormy causes one too many public disasters, Rose is taken to Heartstone, an asylum for unstable magic. Its location? The heart of a haunted forest whose trees have mysteriously turned to stone.
They say the ghosts are bound to the woods … then why does Rose see them drifting outside the windows at night? And why is there a graveyard on the grounds filled with empty graves? Guided by her future selves via time traveling letters, Rose and Marek—best friend and potential figment of her imagination—must solve the mystery of the specters and the stone trees before the ghosts unleash a legendary enemy that will make their own spooks look like a couple of holey bed sheets and destroy Heartstone Asylum.
Letters from the future are piling up. Rose can’t save Heartstone herself. However, five of herselves, a magical storm cloud, and a guardian angel who might very well be imaginary? Now that’s a silver lining.
But will they find what killed the ghosts before what killed the ghosts finds them?
Legend of the Storm Sneezer releases on May 5! Preorder it here!
The final new release is Prince of Shadow and Ash (The Mercenary and Mage Book 1) by Selina R. Gonzalez. This book stole my heart! Regulus and Adelaide are absolutely adorable and my new favorite book couple. If you love A Knight's Tale, Pride & Prejudice, and The Hobbit, definitely check out this book!
Here's what it's about: She could be his light... If his darkness doesn’t destroy them both.
Bastard and former mercenary Lord Regulus Hargreaves just wants to earn his freedom from the sorcerer who enslaved him. When Lady Adelaide sees past his scar and his shadowed past, Regulus’ dying hope rekindles. But will loving Adelaide while serving the Prince of Shadow and Ash put her in danger?
Adelaide Belanger longs to use the magical energy within her, but revealing her power could get her killed. When she meets kind and rugged Regulus, she wonders if she has finally found someone to trust with her secret—and her heart.
Regulus and Adelaide struggle to build a relationship and keep their secrets from those who would harm them. By the time their secrets are revealed, it may be too late for them both...
The final new release is Prince of Shadow and Ash (The Mercenary and Mage Book 1) by Selina R. Gonzalez. This book stole my heart! Regulus and Adelaide are absolutely adorable and my new favorite book couple. If you love A Knight's Tale, Pride & Prejudice, and The Hobbit, definitely check out this book!
Here's what it's about: She could be his light... If his darkness doesn’t destroy them both.
Bastard and former mercenary Lord Regulus Hargreaves just wants to earn his freedom from the sorcerer who enslaved him. When Lady Adelaide sees past his scar and his shadowed past, Regulus’ dying hope rekindles. But will loving Adelaide while serving the Prince of Shadow and Ash put her in danger?
Adelaide Belanger longs to use the magical energy within her, but revealing her power could get her killed. When she meets kind and rugged Regulus, she wonders if she has finally found someone to trust with her secret—and her heart.
Regulus and Adelaide struggle to build a relationship and keep their secrets from those who would harm them. By the time their secrets are revealed, it may be too late for them both...
Prince of Shadow and Ash releases on May 13! Preorder it here!
I hope you have a chance to enjoy some of these awesome books! :)
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