Showing posts with label Elizabeth. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Elizabeth. Show all posts

Friday, March 3, 2017

Endings and Beginnings

Happy Friday!

We wanted to let you know about a few changes happening here at Lands Uncharted as we move into March (and hopefully spring!). As you may have seen, Elizabeth Newsom wrote a post a little over a week ago bidding us farewell. Elizabeth has been with Lands Uncharted since the very beginning and has blessed us so much with her insight and humor. We're sad to be losing her, but we hope to reel her back in for a guest post every once in a while :) Check out her website to follow her future updates.

We'll miss you, Elizabeth, and we wish you all the best with your writing and other endeavors!




Fortunately, we also have some good news. Elizabeth Jane Kitchens (who will be known as Lizzie around the blog, to avoid "Elizabeth" confusion) will be joining us as a regular blogger! Yay!!! You may have seen her here before - she did an interview with us last year, and her YA fantasy novel, The Beast's Enchantress, has come up in several of my posts (my full review is here, and I also discussed it in Top 3 Books I Read in 2016).

We are thrilled to welcome Lizzie to Lands Uncharted in a more official capacity, and can't wait to get to know her better! Make sure to check out her new bio page and stop back tomorrow for her first post!

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Bidding You Adieu (Elizabeth)

Well, this is going to be my last Lands Uncharted post for a while. I'm doing well in school and writing, but it's getting too hectic for me to maintain everything. I'm going to leave Lands Uncharted to improve my own blog and focus on some personal goals. I remember the first email Laurie sent me asking me if I'd join: “If you ever have any interest in doing a group blog in addition to your personal blog, let me know :)”
It's been over a year since, and I've enjoyed being in a group blog immensely. It's great to have people to keep you accountable and to work with other writers in your genre. I'm going to miss everyone, and I hope to pop in from time to time. In memory of my times here on Lands Uncharted, I'm doing my last post on my favorite posts.

Favorite Posts I've Written
8 Tips for Curing Writer's Block
Marriage on the Rocks
Shadowing Your Story

Favorite Post By Laurie
The Start of My Publishing Journey... /Favorite Couples From Books
I couldn't decide between the two! I'm so excited for Laurie's Contract!

Favorite Post By Laura
Markus Zusak on Failure (Laura)
I had no idea he had a talk! I can't wait to listen to it.

Favorite Post By Hannah
Welcome to Storytelling Magic! (Hannah)
I love how she introduces Reni--it's such a creative idea. And I'm trying not to be envious of her art skills ;)

Favorite Post By Erin
What is Fantasy?
So informative! I will forever refer to this list when looking at subcategories of fantasy.

Favorite Post By Jill
Top 3 Ways to Combat A Creative Block (Jill)
This mentions several great methods I've used more than once.

What's your favorite post I've written? Which posts on this blog have impacted you the most?

Thank you for reading this last post of mine!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Thursday, February 9, 2017

Favorite Subgenres of Romance

Valentine's Day is coming up and, I hope you have that Valentine's spirit, because today we're look at our favorite subgenres of romance!



What subgenres are your favorite? Which types of romance did I miss?

Hope you have a happy Valentine's Day!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Saturday, January 21, 2017

Top 3 Ways to Combat a Creative Block (Elizabeth)

Today, I'm going to continue on Jill's wonderful Top 3 post on Combatting a Creative Block by adding some of the things I've learned from my 8 Tips for Curing Writer's Block post.



1. Journal
With my mom's Air Force history, she tells us that if we sweat more in practice, we'll bleed less in war. That's a gung-ho way of saying prevention is the best cure. Oftentimes, I get amazing ideas... when I don't need them or can't use them. I'll be in the middle of a tough edit for my current story, and I'll find a dozen story ideas clamoring at the gates of my mind. Or I'll be in the middle of a debate round and come up with an idea for a great case.
Keep a journal with you (or a running list on your phone) of ideas and things that inspire you. These can be writing prompts, quotes, pictures, stories, or character sketches. Pinterest can also be a useful tool, if you don't spend too much time on it.
By keeping a list of creative ideas flowing when you have them, you might be able to stop the block before it starts.

2. Talk It Out
When I'm stuck or trying to brainstorm, I find that having another human brain around comes in handy. Not that I'm recommending you keep organs around your house in jars or anything. I find human brains are most helpful when they're still within the person's skull. Anyway...
Grab a patient friend or family member, someone who is personally invested in you and, consequently, your story. Ask when they'll be free, because if you try to drag their attention away from another project, you're fighting a losing battle. You want their minds to be solely focused on the problem you're facing. Explain it to them and hear what they have to say. Their ideas might be completely useless, but those ideas might create a domino effect, inspiring you to create more of your own ideas.

3. Let Go and Let GodStrangely enough, I’ve found that at the source of my stress is a lack of faith. I’m preparing for my next speech and debate tournament, trying to keep up with my personal blog and this blog, trying to edit my manuscript, trying to get scholarships to go to an expensive college, and trying to get a driver’s license. Several times, I’ve wished that there were more than 24 hours in a day. Then I might have a teeny tiny chance of getting everything done. But God made 24 hours in a day for a reason. He knows what I can and can't do in 24 hours, and His plan doesn't require anymore of me than what I have.
If God wants you to write this manuscript, He has a plan for it--from that pesky scene that doesn't have the right pacing to the agent who's going to represent it. Trust that by pursuing God's calling for your life, He'll take care of the details.

What's the biggest problem that stops up your creativity? How do you deal with creative blocks to your writing?

Thanks for reading!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Tuesday, January 17, 2017

Writing Characters: Backstory, Personality, Appearance (Elizabeth)

Today, we're going to take some time and explore the characters within your story by first asking questions to reveal backstory, before deciding on their personality and appearance.



Backstory
First of all, you have to find out who your character is and who she was. What does she most want? What is her opposite desire? Can your character want both at times? And why does she want it? Humans have conflicting desires all of the time, and so should your character. For example, last night I wanted a brownie, but I also wanted to be healthy and avoid sugar. What conflicting desires does your character have and why? Which desire wins in the end and why? What is driving this behavior?
Writing is often an exploration of finding the answers to the "whys" behind everything.

Concerning backstory, consider creating a Ghost or Black Moment somewhere in your protagonist's past. What's something tragic or dramatic that explains your character's flaw? How can you hint at this story to create mystery and make the reader ask questions about what happened?

Personality
By answering some of the above questions, you should know a bit about the character's personality. See if you can find their MBTI type. One of the easiest ways I've found is to go down into the personality functions. If you know of a character whose personality is similar to your character's, see if you can find their MBTI type on mbtifiction.com.
To get you started, here are a few questions: Is you character introvert or extroverted? Is she more focused on the physical or the abstract? Is she more present or past focused? Does she like to share her feelings or keep them to herself? Does she do her best thinking aloud or quietly and alone? Answering these questions will help guide you through the test as you discover her personality.

Appearance
Now that you've scooped the ice cream and topped it with whipped cream, you get to add sprinkles! There are a variety of sprinkles, but they have little impact on the taste of the sundae. Of course, they're still fun to add.
First of all, are there any certain aspects of appearance your character must have for this plot or story? Do the people of her race have a certain color of eyes? Does she have some unique feature that marks her as an outcast?
For the less significant things, try out whatever appeals to you.
Use Azalea's Dolls to figure out how your character would look. (Make sure to try the Lord of the Rings, Sci-Fi Warrior, and Snow Queen creators too)
Skim How to Write Descriptions of Hair and Skin and How to Write Descriptions of Eyes and Faces by Val Kovalin  for ideas and descriptions of types/colors of hair and eyes, along with other physical attributes.
If you want ideas for describing eyes and hair along with many other things, check out descriptionari.com. 

Now share the characters you've created! What's your character's Black Moment? Their personality? How would you describe their appearance?

Thanks for reading!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Thursday, January 5, 2017

Black and Red (The Circle Series) by Ted Dekker (Elizabeth)



Black is an exploration of the Fall, God’s nature, and the Great Romance–“to love at any cost.”
Red is about sacrifice, love, and the role Jesus played in saving us.

In Black by Ted Dekker, Thomas is part of two worlds. One where he’s running from a gang he’s indebted to while trying to save the world from the next World War III–modern earth–and one where he lives in an Edenic paradise, so long as he doesn’t cross the bridge to the black forest, where red-eyed, flesh-eating bats live, the Shataiki.
Both worlds are fascinating, each with its own unique plot that’s connected to the other. In the Edenic paradise world, supposedly the far future, he learns about a disease that’s going to wipe out most of modern earth’s population. Because he knows things he has no business knowing on modern earth, he’s hunted down by an assassin.
The world building is fascinating, and I love the sensory description. It makes you wonder how Eden actually looked and how complete union with God actually felt. It makes you realize how much humanity is missing because of the Fall.
This book had plenty of action, with martial arts, chases down alleys, kidnappings, and of course, the creepy bats, and it was interspersed with a few humorous scenes that made me laugh.
The beginning was intriguing, but the best part of the book is when you’re deep into the plot, so if you do happen to pick up this book, make sure to stick with it.

In Red by Ted Dekker,  what really hooked me about this book was the new life it breathed on the Bible and its message. The plots in both worlds were intriguing and suspenseful, but the new perspective this book has given me is so much more memorable.
I'd give you more of a review, but I wouldn't want to spoil anything from the first book ;)

We've finally reached a new year, so what have you learned about God’s nature in 2016? How has your understanding of Him changed in the past year?

Any suggestions for fantasy books or book you'd like to see reviewed? Feel free to tell me about them in the comments!

Saturday, December 24, 2016

Top 3 Christmas Movies (Elizabeth)

Well, it's Christmas Eve, and tomorrow's the big day! The next few hours will be busy with last-minute present shopping, church services, hanging out with family and friends, and maybe a Christmas movie or two! For your convenience on Christmas Eve, I'm posting my top 3 Christmas movie recommendations, from oldest to the latest.

1. It's a Wonderful Life (1946)

This movie is a classic. If you haven't seen it before, I highly recommend checking it out. In It's a Wonderful Life, we see George grow up as a selfless young man. He loses his hearing in one ear from an illness after saving his little brother from drowning in a freezing lake. Then he's beaten while trying to stop a grieving pharmacist from accidentally giving someone poison. Then he sacrifices his honeymoon to help the townspeople of Bedford Falls. George has always dreamed of traveling outside of his little town, but his duties and sacrifices keep him stuck in the town he can't stand. Fast forward a few years, and George is contemplating suicide. He says he wishes he'd never been born, and his guardian angel grants him his wish, showing him an alternate reality where he doesn't exist.
I remember when I was younger, my siblings and I would often behave worse on Christmas. Little squabbles would become more frequent. It's so easy to focus on what you can get rather than what you already have, which is why this movie is a wonderful reminder to be grateful for what you've been given.

2. Jingle All the Way (1996)

While It's a Wonderful Life is a deeper movie about gratitude, Jingle All the Way is a light-hearted comedy about a man trying to get his son a Turbo Man action figure in time for Christmas. But there's one problem: it's Christmas Eve. Yeah, remember that last-minute shopping I mentioned earlier? Howard is a busy guy, and he's continually absent during his son's best moments. The only thing his son wants for Christmas is a Turbo Man. If he fails to get the toy, his son will be crushed, so he goes head-to-head with a crazy mailman and a gang of Santa Clauses who make counterfeit toys to find his son's Turbo Man.

3. Elf (2003)

Elf is a comedy about Buddy, a man who was raised as an elf. Now, he plunges into the heart of New York city to find his biological father. But there's a problem: humans are weird. They haven't even heard of the four main food groups: syrup, candy corn, candy canes, and candy. While Buddy's family tries to integrate him into their life, he tries to inject their holiday with some Christmas spirit.

Have you seen any of these movies? Of the ones I listed, which are your favorite? What are your favorite Christmas movies or stories?

Have yourself a merry little Christmas!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Tuesday, December 13, 2016

My Writing Journey (Elizabeth)


Once upon a time, I wanted to be a writer. While this is true, this isn’t where my story begins. My story starts a bit further back. In the 2nd grade actually.


When I was in the 2nd grade, being a writer had never crossed my mind. I simply devoured whatever chapter books I could get my hands on and wrote cute, little, terrible stories about bunnies and kites.
Then I began homeschooling. Our initial homeschooling curriculum left much to be desired. In other words, we did two hours of school a day. I spent most of my time reading. If I had a decent-sized chapter book, like Ramona and Beezus, I could finish it in a day. I began working my way through the Little House in the Big Woods series.

When I was 10, I got an itty, bitty laptop for Christmas. It didn’t have any virus protection, and I never figured out how to connect it to the internet, so I just used it to write a smattering of terrible, uncompleted stories that remind me of how far I’ve come. If I’d had any idea how terrible I was, I would’ve stopped. But I didn’t know, so I kept writing. I wrote about DS games, Legos, and evil babies trying to take over the world. The antagonist was a dentist. When I was younger, I’d gone to the dentist and had 13 cavities filled at once. Let’s just say I was a bit salty about that.

Then school slammed me like a pro wrestler. I went through a season where I devoted myself entirely to academics, and the flood of novel reading and writing slowed to a trickle. I had two short story assignments during that time, and they reminded me of how passionately I loved writing.

Once summer, when I was 15, I got hooked on reading again, particularly romance. I’d dabbled in fan fiction a little. I’d tried a Star Wars one, but the idea had fizzled with little results to show for the few chapters I’d written. Then I heard about a fan fiction called Jelsa, Jack Frost and Elsa. I thought that was weird. 
Really weird. 
Jack Frost is 14, and Elsa is 21, though Jack is always older in the fan fictions. I was right: they were quirky. After reading a few fan fictions, I stopped and thought, I can do better than that. A grand total of two Jelsa books, 191,625 words, 1,146 reviews, 217 followers, and 261 story favorites later, I had done better. With the external encouragement from the reviews, I summoned enough motivation to finish my first stories. Throughout fall, I wrote every single day, about two hours per day. When I missed one day, my readers would demand more, so I met those demands. I was thrilled. People actually liked what I’d written, and so did I. Maybe, just maybe, this passion could go somewhere. I decided to get serious about this.

After hours and hours of research over Christmas break on helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com, I’d outlined my first original story. January 2nd, 2015, I published my first chapter. My stomach was twisting in knots all day. I knew people would hate it. Two reviews trickled in. I kept writing.
Then my dad told us we were moving, with three months notice. Both my writing and school were crippled as I spent all day working on the house. During the summer, I finished my book, gaining 530 reviews, 113 favorites, and 141 follows. People liked this story, so I figured I might as well publish it and make some money on the side, right?

During the summer of 2015, I bought a book: Go Teen Writers: How to Turn Your First Draft into a Published Book. If I was going to publish this story myself, it was going to be top-notch. But then I read about traditional publishing, agents, and something entirely foreign and unheard of: writer’s conferences. I didn’t know they’d existed. The book mentioned ACFW, so I thought I’d check it out.
I joined Scribes, where I met Laurie, and eventually migrated to a smaller critique group. While I was on ACFW, I saw that they had a conference coming up. I filled notebooks up with research and information. I rewrote my book before the conference: 90,000 words in twelve days, from beginning to end.

I attended the conference, made connections with agents and writers, learned about the craft, and met Francine Rivers. After leaving the conference, I knew I had to start building my platform: I needed a blog.

The first time the blog Lands Uncharted was ever mentioned was in an email with Laurie, where she said, “If you ever have any interest in doing a group blog in addition to your personal blog, let me know :)” That was in November 2015, and by January 2016, Lands Uncharted officially launched!
I won a free, professionally-designed personal blog from KikaDesign, and it launched officially in February 2016.

I posted the original story again online—this time on WattPad, where I now have 129,000 views, 8,200 likes, and 1,000 comments. During summer, I went to both the Realm Maker’s Conference, which I heard about from writers attending ACFW, and the 2016 ACFW conference.
After getting my editorial review back from Nadine Brandes earlier this year, I had a hunch my manuscript needed some serious overhaul. It was lacking a definitive character arc—the pinnacle of a good novel. I’m still in the process of that rewrite.


That covers my writing journey over the past 10 years. It’s amazing where God can take you in that amount of time. What journeys has God taken you on in the last 10 years?

Thanks for reading!

Thursday, December 1, 2016

Christmas Traditions

For today's Your Turn post, I thought we'd kick off December by talking about Christmas Traditions. The vast majority of us celebrate Christmas, yet we all have a different way of doing it.
Do you use Christmas lights? Do you prefer colored lights or white lights? Do you use Christmas lights outdoors? Do you decorate your yard? 

Do you have a real or fake Christmas tree? Do you have any special or unique ornaments for your tree? For example: we have a Santa on an airplane and a pickle ornament. 

What kinds of foods do you have around Christmas? 

Do you have any traditions concerning presents? For example, oftentimes my family will have a Secret Santa system where everyone is given a budget to spend on someone else. And we open one present on Christmas Eve. On Christmas Day, we take turns opening presents, usually going up in age or down in age. We vary it from year-to-year.

Do you get stocking stuffers?

What kinds of activities do you like to do before Christmas? Caroling? Ice-skating? Seeing Christmas lights?

Do you usually spend Christmas out of town or at home?

Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy the days leading up to Christmas!

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Saturday, November 19, 2016

Top 3 Sassiest Animal Characters (Elizabeth)

What Disney movie is complete without its animal companions? They provide both comic relief and solace for the hero/heroine while spicing the movie up with their fun personalities, which is why today I'm listing the top 3 sassiest animal characters, in no particular order.

3. Abu

Abu is Aladdin's tiny partner-in-crime in Aladdin.

While he has a tendency to be a tad greedy...


He's also generous--though grudgingly so.



Abu is both adorable and feisty, with a personality that's bigger than he is.

2. Pascal

Pascal is Rapunzel's companion in Tangled. Above all, he's protective and cautious.


Not to mention brave! I mean, how many friends do you have that'd be willing to give someone a wet willy on your behalf?









Though he's tiny, he keeps not only Maximus, but Flynn Ryder in line.
Overall, Pascal is there for Rapunzel when she needs him, and he never lets his tiny size get in the way of protecting her.

1. Mushu
And lastly, there's Mushu, the mighty guardian of Mulan in... Mulan. Go figure ;)

Despite his size, Mushu can be terrifying, awe-inspiring...

But he also has a motherly side.
Mushu: [stuffing breakfast into Mulan's mouth] No time to talk. Now remember, it's your first day of trainin', so listen to your teacher and no fightin', play nice with the other kids, unless, of course, one of the other kids wanna fight, then you have to kick the other kid's butt. 
(from imbd.com)






And he's pretty clever when the situation calls for it...



What are your favorite animal sidekicks from movies?

Thanks for reading!
Elizabeth Newsom

Attributions:
Pictures of Abbu: Aladdin, 1992.
Pictures of Pascal: Rapunzel, 2010.
Pictures of Mushu: Mulan, 1998.

Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Targeting Your Audience (Elizabeth)



Ready
First of all, what kind of readers do you want to hunt down? If you don’t know, there are several ways to figure out. First of all, if you post your story on a website like Wattpad, you can track the demographic of your readers, specifically age, location, and gender.



If it’s not posted online, have a variety of beta readers read it and see if your book appeals to a certain age group or gender.
If all else fails, you can generally look at the protagonist’s age and assume the reader will be a bit younger. Readers have a tendency to read upward. Of course, this doesn’t always apply. Take Ender’s Game, for example. Ender starts the story at age 6, but a huge portion of its audience is teenagers.

Aim
Once you know what you’re hunting, search out their natural habitat. The best place would be on blog of a reviewer or writer in your genre. As far as social media goes, it’s pretty easy to research what audiences are where. For example, Instagram and Snapchat would be used for YA. Facebook’s users tend to be older. Want more social media audience information?


Fire!
Do a bit of research on how to use the social media you’ve chosen, and ask for advice from the professionals. I’d recommend reading The Extraverted Writer. Then go for it! Pull that trigger—er, send that social media post! You might feel awkward and stupid at first, but that’s okay. You have to let yourself make some mistakes.


What’s your target audience? What social media platforms have you tried? Do you have any tips for targeting your audience?

Thanks for reading!
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Thursday, October 27, 2016

A Time to Rise (Out of Time Book 3) by Nadine Brandes (Elizabeth)

If you remember, I posted a review on the first two Out of Time books in the series, and in October, the last book has finally come out!

If you haven't started this series, I'd recommend checking out the book review I linked above, so the summary below won't reveal any spoilers ;)



From Amazon
What more can you sacrifice than your life?

Parvin Blackwater is dead.

At least that's what the Council and the world thinks. But her sacrifice tore down part of the Wall long enough to stir up hope and rebellion in the people. Now she will rise again. Strong, free, and fearless.

Parvin and Solomon must uncover the mysterious clues that Jude left behind in order to destroy the projected Wall once and for all. Meanwhile, the Council schemes to new levels of technology in its attempts to keep the people contained. Can a one-handed Radical and a scarred ex-Enforcer really bring shalom to the world?


All the books in the series have covered an inspiring part of Parvin's faith journey, and this book was no exception. Her spiritual journey was both inspiring and relatable. The characters were multi-dimensional, inspiring me with their examples, yet still very much human and flawed. And, of course, I adored Solomon and Parvin's relationship. Parvin had to learn what it means to step back and let Solomon take charge. I suspect that this won't came naturally for me either... I seriously loved Solomon. He was always a leader, yet he was also completely behind whatever Parvin tried to do. He was kind, compassionate, and his faith and reliability helped anchor Parvin. After what they'd been through previously, Solomon would have done almost anything to make sure they're not separated again. The plot, as always, was interesting and kept me on my toes. I was never quite sure what to expect next. Being the last of the series, the book concluded beautifully, and its ending resonated with shalom.

Endings can be hard. What factors do you think determine a satisfactory ending? Have you ever struggled with your role in a relationship, like Parvin?

Thanks for reading!
-Elizabeth Newsom

Saturday, October 15, 2016

Top 3 Unusual Force Powers (Elizabeth)

I was inspired by Laura's Top 3 Magical Elements in Harry Potter, so I decided to do a post on the most unusual Force powers, from Star Wars. When most people think of the Force, the think of telepathy, Jedi mind tricks, agility, and telekinesis, but there are so many more, a few of which I'll be showing you today.



3. Thought bomb
Side of Force: Dark Side

Multiple Sith Lords are required to form this powerful piece of Force weaponry. When the bomb explodes, it completely destroys any Force being in the area, both their bodies and their blue ghosts, and captures their souls in a swirling vortex of eternal torment. Fun.

2. Alter Environment
Side of Force: Light Side

Using this power, a Force-user can manipulate their environment by causing sub-zero temperatures, blistering heat, enough air pressure to burst your ear drums, create fogs, storms, earthquakes, and flash floods.

1. Dopplegänger
Side of Force: Universal

Using this, a Force-user could create duplicate illusions of him or herself, which they could manipulate to talk and move like real people. This power can also be used to make identical illusions of other objects.

If you could have any of these force powers, which would it be? (Hopefully, not many of you would choose the Thought bomb... If you do, I'll have to remember I don't want to get on your "dark side" ;)

Thanks for reading!

-Elizabeth Newsom

Attributions:
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/File:Yodasforcedeflection.png
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