tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3633977426784875178.post5314002326549777656..comments2023-05-29T02:41:21.282-05:00Comments on Lands Uncharted: Bad First Lines (Laura)Laurie Luckinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00456113371420700748noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3633977426784875178.post-64458977488609443752017-07-13T19:19:51.872-05:002017-07-13T19:19:51.872-05:00Thanks, Brenna and Laurie!
Laurie, very nice. ;-)...Thanks, Brenna and Laurie!<br /><br />Laurie, very nice. ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04099853616488465874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3633977426784875178.post-54896989216871365922017-07-13T14:56:49.998-05:002017-07-13T14:56:49.998-05:00Haha, I love it! They were all great, but I think ...Haha, I love it! They were all great, but I think the first was my favorite :) All right, I'll give it a try with the opening of the new story I've been working on:<br /><br />"If only I didn't have to go home," I thought to myself for the fifth time that afternoon. I sighed heavily through my deep ruby lips, and brushed strands of glossy, black hair out of my face. This wasLaurie Luckinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00456113371420700748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3633977426784875178.post-43548074512098089432017-07-13T12:55:30.828-05:002017-07-13T12:55:30.828-05:00Wow, these are hilarious! I especially liked the l...Wow, these are hilarious! I especially liked the last one.:)<br /><br />~BrennaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com